Soul's Remedy

My most recent poem about self injury and my struggle with

Soul's Remedy
Written 10/21/03 - 15 years-old

Frost bitten dreams
Suffocated hope
Cradled sanity
Hanging desperately
Onto this sense of fatality
Suffer this blade
Enduring this pain
Lost trust
Bidding me
Take this final breath
Destroy this light
Everlasting impair
That cradles my reveries
Bliss in each blade
Carving radiance
My soul's own remedy
Burning each deceit
Into fragile flames
Into my mentality
Carrying me closer
To my final fate
To my final resting place
Where I can be perfect-
You sought me to
Cruel illusions
Set for me
Rectified only by
My Soul’s own remedy.


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