The Ocean and I

Redacted poem using Walt Whitman's poem "Out of the Rolling Ocean, the Crowd" and

Selection Used - Snippet from Walt Whitman's poem Out of the Rolling Ocean ▶︎

Out of the rolling ocean, the crowd, came a drop gently to me,
Whispering I love you, before long I die,
I have travel'd a long way, merely to look on you to touch you,
For I could not die till I once look'd on you,
For I fear'd I might afterward lose you.

The ocean came gently to me
whispering,
Before I die
I have to touch you
I could die
for fear I might lose you.


About This Poem ▶︎

Written For: "The Daily Poem "  9/6/2022
Prompt/Form: Redaction Poetry

"Redacted poetry is a form of found poetry characterized by the use of a marker (usually black marker) to redacts or “blacks out” from existing text (e.g. newspaper, magazine, book, etc.). The surviving words are then read in sequence, unless visually connected otherwise, as a poem.” - Offbeatpoet.co, - https://medium.com/offbeat-poetry/what-is-redacted-poetry-c1f2632cdd98

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