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How do you feel after a hot day, working in the yard?

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Sweat dripping off her
face as she leaves a finished
yard. She swears, “No more!”

A senryu poem is different from a haiku. It has no seasonal words, but centers on the human condition.
It still must use the 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
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