One Day

Just looking for feedback :)

A land of secrets, shocks and surprises
This is what my heart desires
A place where rules are nothing but guidelines
Where people don't watch and judge by the sidelines
A place where love and peace flow freely
The days go slow but we don't grow weary
No guilt, no loss, no regret, no tears
No reason for us to count down the years
My love of this life will never fade
Though time may take my hope away
This world is working as it should
Even if there is no good