In the Shadow of the Storm -Chapter 1-15

by StarlessJack

Rated: 18+ · Book · Fantasy · #1887970

A Storm is rising in the East. When will it break?

This is my first attempt at a novel, at about first draft stage. Not all of it is up, but it is up to 25 chapters and 120k words total. The main reason I am putting it up at the moment is to get critiques, and general feedback on what works, what doesn't, and general errors.

#16. Chapter 15
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#15. Chapter 14
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#14. Chapter 13
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#13. Chapter 12
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#12. Chapter 11
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#11. Chapter 10
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#10. Chapter 9
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#9. Chapter 8
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#8. Chapter 7
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#7. Chapter 6
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#6. Chapter 5
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#5. Chapter 4
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#4. Chapter 3
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#3. Chapter 2
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#2. Chapter 1 - The Raid
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#1. Prologue
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