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OH, TO BE WHOLE
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Itchy Water~fictionandverse
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Relationship
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1791921
Similiar to an English Tanka but with an added verse.
Intro Rated:
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Created: July 8th, 2011 at 11:14
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Modified: October 6th, 2011 at 5:29
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Oh, how
I need thee
to be
part of me,
make us whole
you and me
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