Dance

My new poem about a dancer; suggestions appreciated!

Dance

The spotlight shines,
All eyes on me,
Dancing,
Floating through the air,
One move flowing into the next,
Elegance, grace, and beauty together,
Spinning, whirling, flawless,
A hypnotic, colorful trance,
Gliding to a smooth stop,
A sweet breath taken in,
Then a chorus of applause,
A symphony of cheers,
A harmony of approval,
Dancing my life toward happiness.