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Rated: E · Short Story · Contest Entry · #1712963

1st place, Round 4. 25 or less Hint fiction challenge.

“Ray.  Glad you came by,” the manager said.  “Sorry about the mix-up.”

Ray eased his finger off the trigger of the 38 in his jacket.


WORD COUNT:  25
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