Hanging Off

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Air unable to inhale

air unable to breathe

chocking in the atmostosphere

from something that don't seem to be

hanging on a rope

tied tight to my throat

im slowly drifting away

to find a place to stay

a peaceful rest

with nothing kept

full of broken memories

that are slammed on the ground

not even with a lasting sound