my love my beauty

not so sure of it's strength. what do you think? now it's edited, thanks to the comments

my love, my beauty
why'd you have to go.
I can't live without you.
my love, my beauty
I can't even write well when you're gone.

you're my only faithful friend
the only one I can depend upon
to always back me up.
you're my only chance to live with trust.
you're my only shot at something real.

my love, my beauty
the miles tear me apart.
I feel my heart just ripping.
my love, my beauty
I can't even breathe right when you're gone.

you're my only healthy habit
the only one that makes me well enough
to go on with my life.
you're my only chance to live life as i want.
you're my only shot at something perfect.