Poem: untitled

poem i wrote about suicide. please review! :P

confused
depressed
pathetic
to end it all?
that would be bliss
but bliss can never be
cowardice
falsehood
deceit
death will not come
but pain is near
embrace the pain?
impossible
death would be so easy
quickly, quietly
an end to all the pain
but an easy death is selfish
all death is, is a means to pass along the pain
and through all of the hardship i must face
i may just welcome deaths embrace

(was attempting to make it into a song with my friend, so its a little of both. feel free to say how it could be better as either. thanks!)