Elle and Luke

here is the pitch for a novel I just finished. please let me know what you think.

I made a deal with the devil, if that's what you want to call it.
He is tall, blonde, blue eyed and looks at me in the way every girl dreams a man would.
My name is Elena Montague and I am in love with Lucifer.

Elle is your typical woman trying to make it on her own and without her parents money to help her. she works in a little coffee shop in Toronto where she spends most of her time, until Luke walks in and changes everything.
He captivates her and treats her as she has always dreamed a man would, but there is something about Luke that Elle cannot put her finger on. He never talks about where he comes from or what he does for a living, which Elle does not understand.
When Luke takes Elle on a small vacation to his country house in Northern Ontario all hell breaks loose, literally.