Fantasy Story

This is a new Fantasy Book I'm writing. Does it capture your attention?

         The ground lay littered with the ashes of a thousand men and women. Houses lay in shambles and livestock cease to exist. Where there was once grass, now a scorch of earth. The Dragons have come with there Masters.

         Only 23 minutes. That's what it took to rid the earth of the town of Klempota. It was a small town, rich with diversity and fear. Protection is all they had ever hoped for but will now be lost in darkness instead.