did you ever

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Did you ever love someone
and know they didn't care?
Did you ever fell like crying
knowing it will get you no where?
Did you ever look into someones heart
wishing you were there?
Did you ever watch someone walk away
wishing they wouldn't leave?
Did you whisper I love you
and never let them know?
Did you ever cry yourself to sleep
wishing you were in their arms?
This is somthing I no longer
want to do.
One little slit upon my wrist
just to take the pain away.
If it goes a little deeper
I know i wont be missed.