fall 2007 Fiction Class Portfolio

This is a copy of all four of the pieces that I've been busy loving and painfully revising this fall semester. I am torn at which piece to enter in our school's literary magazine for the spring. Any recommendations would be a big help! I think the deadline is sometime in March. In the meantime, please take a second and read my pieces. Leave me a note and a review too if you have time. Any and all recommendations made are taken into serious consideration. Tell me what you liked best, what spoke to you and what part you didn't like. Your input is much needed.

Thanks
PK