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Could we all do a poem together? |
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Created: February 10th, 2007 at 1:45am
Modified: December 5th, 2007 at 4:00am
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[Introduction]
Let us collaborate on a poem. I hope you all would love to add a line or 2 of your own. Once all of us concur that the poem is complete, I shall put together the complete poem at the conclusion of the campire. For any queries, invites, and suggestions please ping me.
The tentative title I am suggesting is: Silence is Golden
Suggestions/Changes most Welcome.
Silence is Golden!
Silence is Golden
Silver Tongues Spout
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Feb 10, 2007 at 6:22amSize:
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And true heavy Metal
Blasts unbearably Loud
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Feb 13, 2007 at 3:56amSize:
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I flee from the Noise
And hide in Woods' Shade
Where brazen Flute Tones
The Air tingling invade
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DntdKnight ![View markgreenlaw's Portfolio. [Offline / Private] Author Icon](https://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif)
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Feb 13, 2007 at 7:20amSize:
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my senses, my soul, my everything
Sweet chirps from birds add a sweet bliss
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Feb 13, 2007 at 7:31amSize:
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Heaven & Hell
Paradise Won & Paradise Undone
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Feb 13, 2007 at 8:47amSize:
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Below those heavenly Trees
My Tantrum takes to the Sky
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Feb 13, 2007 at 8:49amSize:
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Turned into sweet caresses
New Desires burn within
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Feb 13, 2007 at 9:01amSize:
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Sharpened Shrapnel
Spawns a Death knell
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Feb 13, 2007 at 10:49pmSize:
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A tiny Bird
Tumbles in my Lap
Blood deadly Drips
It's Eye a gaping Gap
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Feb 14, 2007 at 1:46amSize:
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Razors slice to the bone
Ears are deaf to the dying moan
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Feb 16, 2007 at 6:50amSize:
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Sealed with my crystal tear
Empty now the steel-grey sky
An other silence befalls me
Black as decaying tin; oh why
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Feb 18, 2007 at 12:16pmSize:
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A delicate little sparo's wing
stretch out over my fingers
A vision of how delicate life is
How small
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Feb 21, 2007 at 11:40pmSize:
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The sparrow's heart
defeated by hunters delight
I make a vow
The coward killer I'll fight
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Feb 22, 2007 at 10:34amSize:
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The hunter's delight shattered by the fear of his upcoming demise
The soiled clothes, the smell of urine, the terror in his eyes.
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Feb 23, 2007 at 10:42pmSize:
218 Characters What makes man so corrupt,
that he would ruin such a calm, such a peace,
All for the sport of the hunt,
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The piercing scream of the wolves
Shattered the still calm
Gathered in the mist
Lay the puzzled hunter's whip
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Feb 26, 2007 at 7:47amSize:
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He stands in wetted pants
Pride of the human race
Fear of death staining
His lustre lorn face
The wolves howl
Forseeing a cheap meal
Him or me; I run for the whip
Beasts snapping at my heel
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Feb 26, 2007 at 5:11pmSize:
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The Crack of my whip echoes loud in the night, as I held them at bay,
they turned to see the beer drinking hunter, who became their new prey.
He tries to drop his gun, tries to run, he is no longer having any fun,
They drool, hunger is their fuel, they chase after the fool.
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Feb 26, 2007 at 7:26pmSize:
207 Characters The hunter is now the hunted, nature had taken the reigns,
It no longer grovels at the mercy of a gun,
for the roles have been switched in the hunting game |
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Mar 5, 2007 at 9:06pmSize:
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Why is blood such a fancy?
Why are the wolves in such a frenzy?
The beast roams in our midst
Clothing itself in designer garb
Awaiting the hunter's final call
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Mar 9, 2007 at 11:14amSize:
335 Characters Though who is calling who?
Does the hunter call the beast,
Or is the huntsman invited
To offer flesh at beasts feast?
Enamel teeth blickering
Chromium guns flickering
Warm blood dripping
Fearful city flipping
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Mar 13, 2007 at 10:02amSize:
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"A War!" Says Nature, "War!"
It has now become war between man and nature.
Every animal, every creature,
Is tired of man's vile ways,
And is rising up,
To shut him up,
To shout out, and call out,
For their rights!
"But hark! Why can't we compromise?" says man to nature.
Animal may be food to man,
And occationally man to animal,
But must we play these foolish games?
Of gun and teeth, and nail?
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Mar 13, 2007 at 3:09pmSize:
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As snow falls over the trees
The war begins
as we dwell within these
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...mirage of dreams
The snow covers the footprints of the animal
Or is it the man?
Does this War have a conclusion?
Will they call a truce and co-exist?
Will peace reign?
When can we bring out the wine and celebrate?
... Shattering the calm of the GOLDEN SILENCE
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