Grimed Minds

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The grims of life pouring violently;
Unhappy and unfinished, sickly entertained by man's hate and thoughtless actions;
Heart-rendering moments giving excitement;
Open minds simple and easy,wallowing in pain, decays before it's own;
A dark and rainy day setting the perfect stage, Unknown feelings emerge, ... the horrid mind left to know....