when i'm with you

This is one of my first poems, would be greatful for feedback

You have my heart in the palm of your hand
With the slightest motion you leave me breathless
I look into your eyes
My heart skips a beat
I can't believe I am still standing on my feet

I take a deep breath almost unaware
Without a care
I feel as light as a feather
I don't think life could get any better
Than the time we are together