She's gone

this a song ive been working on it needs a lot done just want some honest opinions

She walks the streets
worn down, alone
no reason to find her way back home
theres no one waiting there for her
just memories that cause th hurt


theres no ryhme no reason now
she spent her life looking
for what she won't find now
she walks
she walks under a cloud
weighs down heavy on her shoulders
its dragging her down
she's given up
she wont find what she's been looking for now

Nobody seems to see her cry
they ignore as she walks on by
pretend not to see
turn a blind eye
why cant they see
she's on her way to die

theres no rhyme or reason now
she cant remember how she got here
she walks
she walks under a cloud
weighs down heavy on her shoulders
its dragging her down
a lost souls time is wasted
now she's gone.