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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE MEMOIR

Amethyst Autumn Angel Author IconMail Icon shares how she found Writing.com and how she came to enjoy the Website.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the voice of the story. It was rich and honest, filled with highs and lows and spoke to the heart.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* THEME

For me, I picked out the theme of growth. There's a lot of growth here - On the surface, there's growth in writing, and honestly, I've read several stories by Amethyst and they are very dynamic. I've enjoyed everything I've read. On a deeper level, you can see emotional growth as well, and the continued to desire to keep growing in these areas.

*Star* EMOTIONAL BEATS
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*CheckR* *Checkr* *Checkr* As our author goes from achievement to achievement, the emotional heartbeat of the story grows rich and fulfilling.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to bring the memoir to life.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening intrigues the reader with a push/pull grab and then hooks us the reviews she received and the gift subscription. The writing is candid, honest, and sincere. Thank you for sharing a very inspirational story.

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