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Captain Paws and the Treasure Bone Open in new Window. [E]
A brave bulldog pirate sails the seas to find the legendary golden bone.
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about a dog pirate, his muttly crew and the search for the elusive dog bone.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the whimsical story the poem told. It was very cute and made me chuckle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 6 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "They found the chest, all cracked and old. Inside, a bone of gleaming gold!" An easy visual that makes the reader feel like a flea on the flap of Captain Paws hat.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in with a nice, easy beat and keeps them reading. The title is a great fit for the poem. A charming read that's upbeat and heartwarming. I'd love to read more adventures of Captain Paws.

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