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Code Talkers  Open in new Window. [13+]
Two Navajo Marines go into battle.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This action packed story of American's storming a Japanese beach is rich in details. The hot, sticky weather, the constant peril and stress come out well.

Even with Navajo language on their side, the Americans have a moment of confusion, showing just how chaotic warfare is.

The text flowed nicely. I never wondered about meaning and I didn't have to reread any sentences. But look at this: The beginning of this sentence rhymes.
The air was wet and sweat rolled down his brow.

Great way to kick off my week of reviewing.

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