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 Review #4837412 |
Watch the Leg, Man  [ASR] You broke your leg how...? (a Writer's Cramp entry)  |
| (5.0)  A review from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  First Impressions: There is never a good time to break your leg, but just before Christmas must have been one of the worst. For a moment, I thought you were going to say that your Christmas present that year were skies or something similar that you weren't able to use, but it wasn't quite that bad. I have to admit that I chuckled a little at the image of you going down like a felled tree - sorry, but the description was excellent and I could imagine that scene very well. I didn't laugh at the part where you broke your leg though. Again, the description was very good, too good to be honest, and it made me cringe. You told the story with a measure of humour which took the edge off a little, but it still came across that you were in a lot of pain and hobbling around on the cast was very inconvenient.  Suggestions: The story was very polished - I didn't notice any errors and I don't have any suggestions.  Final Thoughts: It seemed that you were more annoyed with Mark for letting you fall than with Gregg for breaking your leg in the first place! I suppose in a house with three boys, things like that happen, and you took it all in your stride. It feels wrong to say that I enjoyed the read, but I did.
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