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 Candy Apple Red Corvette Open in new Window. [13+]
Returning after a long absence, Caroline tries to intergrate herself with old friends.
by a Sunflower in Texas Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi a Sunflower in Texas Author IconMail Icon;

It's Carly and I have the pleasure of raiding your portfolio and reviewing something as part of the "It's WDC- 25th Birthday" scavenger hunt. Today we have to find members who joined WDC between 2002 and 2004 and your lovely name popped up.

I decided to pick a fiction piece and went with this. My original name is Carolyn so I am pretty vigilant on find the name spelt wrong. You left the 'o' out of the 4 last paragraph, but beyond that everything else looks great.

I like the idea of meeting back up with friends after a decade apart. Especially an old boyfriend. Caroline has made some changes and lost weight. She old beau is cranky and makes quite a few 'fat' comments. I would be curious to see the meeting itself.

I wanted to know more. Caroline sounds like an interesting character.

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