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 My First Memory Open in new Window. [E]
Assignment #34 for The Terrace
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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         Aren't familial memories some of the best? Of course, much of what any of us remember is tinted by the perceptions of a child. The why often eluded us. Houses were more than a structure, or a shelter. They contained adventures and mysteries. I admire your writing style. Including dialogue makes your story realistic and relatable. Thanks for sharing.
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