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 Disasterpiece Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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One of those stories melded in with a question posed and something to think about for the reader.

I think doing it this way was much better than an essay, proposing a hypothetical "what if...?" scenario and then filling in the details as they become relevant. But, the thing is, it is sort of science fiction at the moment, but we are so close to this being science fact. Nice use of the current world to put this forward.

Technically it was fine, but this sentence left me scratching my head: "Power systems were reports that public service techs received texts directing them to sites needing repair, and with codes to key in at any gas station to fill up at the pump."

So a story to make people think, and with AI realising it is soulless...

Good luck going forward.

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