CHAN, very nicely done, and quite compelling. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed the read.
Why I read it: It was a random selection from the Writing.com Read & Review list.
What I liked: The softness in the telling of the story and the way each stanza is allowed to resonate with the reader's mind more than with the eyes.
What I would change: Nothing.
Recommendation: A must-read love poem for lovers

Write on, WRITE ON!


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