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 A Mystery Package Open in new Window. [18+]
It was a Wednesday afternoon. The package came in an unremarkable box...
by hydrogen86 Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. The story was compelling and the structure was well presented with interesting characters, which is impressive in so few words!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this story. Nice work!


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