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 | What Is Sum1 Up To Today?  [13+] Being Retired now, I thought that it was time for a new name to this Blog  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Hello, Jim D! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:  I enjoyed reading your "Wait, this is a Father's Day present?" blog post today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end every time. Congratulations to you on your 15th Writing.Com anniversary! MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:  Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines. I found your poem in your port today. I wanted to give you an anniversary review on your actual anniversary. I a laugh, so your title drew me in and I clicked and read your blog post and enjoyed it greatly, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too! I loved your blog post so much. It was full of humor and fun anecdotes about your life. It is a good thing you're an easygoing guy. I know a lot of people who might have been offended, but you not only took it all in stride, you seemed to enjoy it. Easygoing people can be easier to get along with and easier to enjoy.  I thought your informal and personal style worked well for your "Wait, this is a Father's Day present?" blog post. It felt like you were telling a friend a story, and I was the friend. Yet it was to the whole world... though maybe we are all your friend!  I had never heard of a vertical waffle maker before, so that was especially interesting. Your favorite food trucks would be favorites in my family too, I suspect. I appreciated that you included fatherly advice at the bottom of your blog post, which made it feel even more like a Father's Day post to me. My very favorite part of your "Wait, this is a Father's Day present?" blog post was how your good nature and sense of humor shined throughout it.IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section. Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!   This is a really nit-picky suggestion, but I would want to know if it were me. I'd recommend removing the period before the comma in the middle of this sentence. Right now it looks like this:"My muse is still on vacation it seems, so this is about all you'll see me write., at least for now. " If you made this change, it would look like this (done so you can see and for easy copy and pasting, should you decide to make the change and think that's easier than just deleting the period ):"My muse is still on vacation it seems, so this is about all you'll see me write, at least for now. " As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION:  I enjoyed reading your "Wait, this is a Father's Day present?" blog post, and had a few smiles as I read it. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, sense of humor, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, and may the Lord bless you and all that you do, during your anniversary month, and always! PWheeler   A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review!   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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