Hi SIC

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Positives

I thought this was a really compelling, evocative piece of writing. I appreciated the fact that you mentioned both a trigger warning and the fact that it's an experimental piece, and for what it's worth, I think there's something to what you have here. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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