Hi Tucker

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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. I like the fact that you're presenting multiple haiku on different topics all in one static item. A singular haiku in its own item with no context can sometimes feel a little anemic, so I really like the fact that you've combined a few different ones here for additional texture.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with these!


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