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 The Vision or Lack Thereof Open in new Window. [E]
Lacking truth and desire, don't over-plan - a tribute to winning - a prose poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Tim Chiu

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed the structure and the imagery of this piece. I thought it flowed well, was engaging from beginning to end. It was an all-around solid piece.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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