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 An Explanation Open in new Window. [E]
Eve was serene and cool as a summer morning... But Lilith...
by Mary Pavey Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed this poem. It was engaging, entertaining, and well structured. I appreciated the note at the bottom mentioning that it was from the unpublished work of Mary Pavey, which is great context for the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought this piece was a great read. Well done!


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