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 In The Shadow Of Gods Open in new Window. [E]
A man describes how many young people now hold power over their peers.
by Lekio Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed the worldbuilding and the mystery elements of this story. With only a few short paragraphs to work with, you created a compelling, interesting hook for a narrative that could potentially be expanded upon. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this story. Nice work!


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