Hi jamisonbrown

Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought you did a great job with establishing visual, clear imagery in the first two lines, and then bringing it home with a very impactful third line. Short, structured poems can be very difficult to do, but I think you did a great job.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done!


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