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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is a synapsis of a story you wrote. It talks about how there's some sort of being that likes to trap the souls of its victims in a certain type of tree. It also mentions how there are those that can see it, and possibly stop it. One such person is mentioned, and aspects about their life is mentioned. This is all rather interesting, and could draw others into the rest of the story.

Thoughts and Characters
Looks pretty good, and I'm sure that folks will want to learn more about the characters.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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