Hello, Naomi!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I absolutely loved your inspirational essay on happiness. It might be my favorite thing I've read here at Writing.Com this entire month, if not for the whole quarter. It's really lovely and uplifting.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month and day! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this inspirational essay on happiness of yours. I feel the same way about so much of it! Happiness is for you and me and everyone who chooses it. Yes!

Your heart for the Lord shined throughout your inspirational essay on happiness and we have that in common too. I love the Lord and pray to Him often, as you do too. It makes for a much happier and more peaceful existence, I believe.

My favorite line was: "My greatest happiness does not depend on the condition of my life in which The Most High has placed me, but, for me Happiness is the result of a good conscience, good health, have something to do and love what I am doing and freedom in all endeavors." Very well said and thought out! I agree too. It's amazing that this was the first line. I almost never pick that as my favorite, but it was this time. Though I really did enjoy every sentence and your whole inspirational essay on happiness. It is beautiful and uplifting.

Your last line made me smile and cheer for you. Yes! Happiness is for you, Naomi!

I already have fanned you and this lovely inspirational essay on happiness of yours made me want to check out your biography. It appears that you haven't filled it out yet. If you want to, here's the link: https://www.writing.com/main/profile/biography/akomagsusulat ... Anyway, so when that was blank, I went to your main portfolio introduction (here, in case any reader wants to also visit it: https://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/akomagsusulat ) and I loved everything there too. You are someone I would adore having as a neighbor. I will see you in Heaven though! Maybe we'll be neighbors there.

I also love to pray, hum, sing, read and write when I'm alone. I want to know more about your Happy Baskets. If you happen to read this review before I review that item of yours (presuming you have one? I didn't peruse your port much today - just saw this and it caught my eye so I read it and was delighted so am doing this review for you), please send me the link to it. I hope the Lord rewards you for your beautiful heart and prayers and deeds of love!

I thought the inspirational genre you selected was appropriate for this inspirational essay on happiness of yours. I don't recommend using the "other" as I doubt anyone ever searches for that, but if you wanted some suggestions to replace that and add a third (we are allowed to use three genres here, as you probably know, but just in case you didn't, I wanted to share that), some to consider include: religious, spiritual, personal, and experience. Totally optional, of course. I just would love for more people to read this lovely essay that you wrote.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I truly enjoyed reading your inspirational essay on happiness, and smiled all the way throughout reading it and even was encouraged to pray for extra blessings for you and your family and everyone here at Writing.Com.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, love for the Lord God, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and abundant joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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