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 Saturday Night WC 297 Open in new Window. [13+]
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by jackiesmuse Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi jackiemuse, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Saturday Night WC 297" Open in new Window. by Jackiemuse

Clarity:Seems to be a good title.

Writing style:Personal drama.


Overall impressions: Well written story, especially considering it was written as a contest entry.

Written with a soft leisurely tone that works well for this unique story.

I like the way you ended this story with a bit of humor.

Jackiemuse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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