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 Alone Open in new Window. [E]
poetry about the lonliness
by noor ul haya Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Good Evening,
A prose with an interesting title
"Alone "
Well, I can be alone but not lonely even if I am alone with just the beat of my heart.
This one is you are alone with just your
own shadow.
My suggestion in this writing, minimal only :
dont know where i am
Please change this to :
don't know where I am
i saw...i was..
In formal writing always capitalize the letter I
Thank You for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting
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