This is a lovely essay about personified Pen and Paper. You have explained their meaning in many ways. I like the various ways you describe the Pen and Paper--your friend who allows you to experience various aspects of life.

I especially like your sentence about the baby being an angel. You may have been inclined to write a long sentence because of the emotional attachment that you have. I like that you keep it simple.

This is a well-developed essay about our friends Pen and Paper. I enjoyed the read.

I found a few small errors you may want to go back and edit:




"They are a couple." It's a new sentence and you didn't capitalize.

"beloved's face" You need an ownership apostrophe.

The last sentence may be a fragment, I think you need a subject.

Excellent essay.

WRITE ON.

Patrice



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