Hi, NormaJean AKA CHEER QUEEN , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lesson Learned"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mike's mother's statement. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it taught a lesson.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.`








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .