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Given: Sep 4, 2022 at 2:21pm
Length: 765 Characters |
763 w/o WritingML
Dear penelope,
Thank you for sharing this poem. I like the format of a life-cycle. I also like that you made it bold to make it easier for these older eyes to see. I see the verses show the different stages of life of the girl/woman.
One suggestion: Since the verses are different stages, Perhaps capitalize the first word of each verse? I actually like the lack of punctuation.
2nd suggestion: the 2nd to last verse "are ther any regrets"...should it be there?
Question: I have always seen the word "dollie" spelled "dolly" is that just a different spelling?
Also, what does "nemeries" mean? Or is it supposed to be memories?
I really like your poem, and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep up the great job!
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