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 Autumn Won't You Stay a While? Open in new Window. [E]
All too soon, autumn turns to winter.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Halo! I came to your portfolio because it's your WDC Anniversary! *Smile* Since I love reading poetry, I clicked on that folder first and this title caught my eye.

The title and brief description work well for the poem. The layout looks good with the colours. The words chosen and verse structure give a lovely tone. You tell the story beautifully. The images come trhough and the emotions are relatable.

The beginning of the last verse brought a smile to my face. I'm so glad you've recognised that winter can also be beautiful!

Suggestions: Among the genres, you've picked 'contest', I guess you mean 'contest entry'. The picture is lovely, and now that cover pictures are possible, you could add it there, too, maybe. For the layout, maybe you'd like to try font, size, center and line-space, to further increase the impact of your words.
Also - is this a particular poetry form? If so, I'd've liked a note on it at the end of the poem.

Thanks for sharing this poem!
Write On,
Sonali

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