Cool poem!

I keep going back to the first stanza. Is the writer looking talking to the long-dead airman or to a current lover?

I hadn't heard of the chance formula that you used. It is an interesting way to do a prompt.

The poem tells a story, in a way. I am not sure the story is an excuse or the real reason. And as mentioned earlier, I also cannot tell whether the writer is talking to the dead airman or a another person. These questions add to the mystery of it.

It looks like you wrote this 8 or 9 years ago, and you have a birthday coming up. Happy Birthday!

Keep writing and sharpening that imagination.

Cheers,
Bryce

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