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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Story :A plot of theft in the bank while the town is busy celeberating. It's well written and keeps the suspense on till the end.

Likes :Using a skeleton key ,given to wife was a good ploy.

Suggestions :
A few minor suggestions..

cabin, and meet his wife and the money there -> meet his wife who would be there with the money

confessed your plans, Sir.”-> confessed about your plans



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