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 The Jesters' Lie Open in new Window. [E]
The third jester poem, how does the Jester deal with the end of his remission?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a well-written poem that uses the form to move the story on and the rhymes don't seem stretched. The subject while centuries-old seems new and fresh because of the energy of this poem. The mortality of the jester is clear and his duty to keep his suffering from others reminds me of a friend who died of prostate cancer. I can't say more than this poem spoke to me and I appreciated the message.
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