Hi Gabby,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of enthusiasm. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how much you love pumpkin spice. I love pumpkin spice. I tried a pumpkin spice latte last year for the first time, and I have loved it ever since. I made pumpkin spice cookies, and am trying to find the mix this year. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 10/12/2020 @ 6:00pm EDT
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