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Hallo!
Congratulations on uploading your first item in your portfolio.

I love the way you identify yourself as a reader, and the description of how passionate you are about this hobby.


Suggestions:
1. In the 'brief description', I know you mean a brief description of yourself, but it's confusing here as that slot is called 'brief description'! So maybe you could change it to say 'Describing myself' or something.
2. Are you planning to expand this piece?
You've mentioned how voraciously you read, but I'd like to know what reading has done for you in your life. If you are planning to write more this could be a direction to go in.
3. With regard to the layout, maybe you could use font, size and linespace to make it more friendly to the eye.
5. Check for spacing within the piece, after words / punctuation marks.
6. You can just say 'bright sunshine' ... I don't think you need 'a' there.
7. Have you capitalized 'forget' on purpose?
And in that sentence, instead of 'A few days' you could say 'Sometimes'.

Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it!


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