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 Love Me Open in new Window. [E]
Something short and sweet on how to love me
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Lovely poem with a great rhythm. I enjoyed reading it.

My suggestion would be for WritingML -- like font, center and colour, to enhance the impact of the poem.

Also, the poem is complete as it is, and works fine.
But I do wonder what the speaker would offer in return. Maybe a couple of verses about 'Love me and I'll ...' as a sort of 'response' ... ?

Thanks for sharing this little gem!
Write On!
Sonali

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