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Hallo!

This is something that many readers could relate to, having heard all the 'fake' phrases you mention.
The format is nicely done, with the repetition of 'They say' before each line.

I did get a bit confused in the end however.
If all the other phrases are fake, wouldn't the 'I love you' be fake too, and if so, why would you want to hear it from them? Or are you trying to say that this is the only phrase that is genuine?

In terms of suggestions - For the formatting, I think WritingML like center, italics and maybe a bit of colour would enhance the impact of the words.

Also - in terms of the 'intro' rating, you could change it to 'E' because there are no Non-E words in your title or brief description, and an "E' rating reaches more people.

In terms of the 'content' rating, which you've currently put at 18+, you could change it to 'ASR' as your poem falls within this rating and it'll reach more people.

Thank you for sharing this relatable poem!
Write On!


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